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New OC: Ellis the dalmationby *Gedeminas-Bakutiene

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YAY! Here is my new OC everyone! Introducing: Ellis The Dalmation!

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Name: Ellis
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Personality: She loves nature *flowers, animals, etc* & she is very sweet, and can be a little shy at times, however, when she is in a little more of not so much of a good mood, she is a little stubborn.
Theme: NONE *I need help choosing a theme by the way.*

i shall add more later

NOTE: NO negative comments & no stealing!

Thanks for viewing!

Ellis belongs to me.

Critique by ~TrueShadazeLove Jan 26, 2012, 8:27:47 PM

OMG she looks so much like a cat XD. she is still a really nic character,and I hope she can be Connie the Cat's friend ^^
She does seem like the kind of character who would love nature and flowers,she also seems like the kind of girl who does well in school,and has a lot of friends ^^ Out of the stars that you can give someone in a critique, I rate Ellis as a 100%! Though she's a dog, and dogs and cats don't generally get along, I think Connie and Ellis would get along very nicely!^^ they seem as the types to be friends ^^ Nice work ^^

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Critique by =CoffinRoses Dec 5, 2011, 7:31:27 PM

Hey!! This is my secind critique. Umm lets see.. now, I like how you positioned her and you did very good on the shading however, the eyes and shoes look a bit weird. The left eye looks a bit square when it should be more round. The rounder (sometimes) the more feminine!!

The tail should be a bit shorter if she really is a Dalmation and the ears should be more folded in. but thats just my suggestion.

The hands could be more rounder yet again, more feminine if its slightly rounder. You've improved so much on your art hun. I remember when we first used to recolour together... Good times. The outfit reminds me too much on Amy, maybe put a few lil designs on it perhaps?? The shoes look too much like Tails' maybe give it a bit more Heel to the back of the shoe/foot? Again, my suggestion. You have improved so greatly my dear. It looks like SEGA drew it!! You have talent deary!! ;D keep it up!!!